{"id":324,"date":"2011-05-10T14:00:00","date_gmt":"2011-05-10T14:00:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/booksyalove.com\/?p=324"},"modified":"2013-04-30T10:25:53","modified_gmt":"2013-04-30T15:25:53","slug":"haiku-editing-your-thoughts","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/booksyalove.com\/?p=324","title":{"rendered":"Haiku &#8211; editing your thoughts"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>It&#8217;s the ultimate editor&#8217;s blue-pencil job: paring down your dreams, thoughts, inspirations, message, and intentions into that oh-so-regimented haiku format (and today&#8217;s <a href=\"http:\/\/michellerafter.com\/the-2011-wordcount-blogathon\/2011-wordcount-blogathon-blogroll\/\" target=\"_blank\">Wordcount Blogathon<\/a> theme). Yep, 5-7-5 pattern, no deviations (but no rhyme-requirements either).<\/p>\n<p>&#8216;T ain&#8217;t easy, but as an antidote to our these-days tendency toward logorrhea (and blogorrhea), the disciplines of haiku can make us slow down, refocus, edit our writing, pare it down to the essentials.<\/p>\n<p><em>Zen Ties<\/em>\u00a0 is the second of John Muth&#8217;s books [<a href=\"http:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=yTZLJ76yXws\" target=\"_blank\">YouTube book trailer<\/a>] about a Zen master panda living in a regular American neighborhood [<a href=\"http:\/\/store.scholastic.com\/1\/1\/3591-zen-ties-hardcover.html\" target=\"_blank\">publisher site<\/a>] &#8211; this time Koo, his haiku-speaking nephew, comes to visit:<\/p>\n<p>Tea was very good<br \/>\nMy cup holds emptiness now<br \/>\nWhere should I put it?<\/p>\n<p>There can also be a humorous side to haiku&#8217;s rigor, as shown by <em>Guyku: a Year of Haiku for Boys<\/em>,\u00a0 by Bob Raczka and Peter H. Reynolds [<a href=\"http:\/\/www.abookandahug.com\/component\/content\/article\/46-poetry\/20400-guyku\" target=\"_blank\">review<\/a>] [<a href=\"http:\/\/www.houghtonmifflinbooks.com\/guyku\/\" target=\"_blank\">publisher site<\/a>], which features this summer-related guyku:<\/p>\n<p>Lying on the lawn,<br \/>\nwe study the blackboard sky,<br \/>\nconnecting the dots.<\/p>\n<p>The <a href=\"http:\/\/www.iasl-online.org\/sla\/giggleIT\/\" target=\"_blank\">GiggleIT Project<\/a> is a free international online writing project for students, and it includes <a href=\"http:\/\/www.iasl-online.org\/sla\/giggleIT\/2011-project-01.htm#haiku\">haiku<\/a> as one of its <a href=\"http:\/\/www.iasl-online.org\/sla\/giggleIT\/2011-project-01.htm\" target=\"_blank\">2011 competitions<\/a>. Once their teacher or librarian registers a class\/group, then students&#8217; creative writing and artwork can be showcased to a world audience. I should know, since I&#8217;m the GiggleIT publicity chair!<\/p>\n<p>Voices of children,<br \/>\nAll colors and all ages,<br \/>\nLift us with laughter.<br \/>\n**kmm<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>It&#8217;s the ultimate editor&#8217;s blue-pencil job: paring down your dreams, thoughts, inspirations, message, and intentions into that oh-so-regimented haiku format (and today&#8217;s Wordcount Blogathon theme). Yep, 5-7-5 pattern, no deviations (but no rhyme-requirements either). &#8216;T ain&#8217;t easy, but as an antidote to our these-days tendency toward logorrhea (and blogorrhea), the disciplines of haiku can make [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_monsterinsights_skip_tracking":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_active":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_note":"","_monsterinsights_sitenote_category":0,"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[47,98],"tags":[55,112,135,93,61],"class_list":["post-324","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-childrens-books","category-reflective","tag-books","tag-giggleit","tag-haiku","tag-poetry","tag-writing"],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/booksyalove.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/324","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/booksyalove.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/booksyalove.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/booksyalove.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/booksyalove.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=324"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"https:\/\/booksyalove.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/324\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":961,"href":"https:\/\/booksyalove.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/324\/revisions\/961"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/booksyalove.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=324"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/booksyalove.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=324"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/booksyalove.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=324"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}